Topic sentence: I remenber the time I was terribly sick.
Claim 1: I felt ugly and harsh symptoms.
Supporting detail 1: I had a severe pain in the abdominal area that left me walking bad nor sleep.
Claim 2: I had to go to the clinic.
Supporting detail 2: I went to the doctor with my mom. He told me I had to have a surgery because I had appendicitis and was very serious to spend more time.
Claim 3: I recovered at home.
Supporting detail 3: After surgery, taking into account the recommendations of the doctor and the care of my mom I recovered faster, at this time I got no scar.
Conclusion: The time I was sick was unpleasant but I had wonderful care.
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